Please, there are terminologies you do not change went writing my papers such as people, population, intervention, program, health issue, targeted population, and lot more live it the way it is because, once you change those words the paper sound different. Please, from this day forth, if you’re rewriting papers for me, use the reference because that is a direct link to the article, journal, or a textbook read and understand and rewrite base on your understanding of your words. Please find the attached papers re-write the paper with clear understanding, and make it plagiarize free based on the question. Also, please rewrite it from paragraph to paragraph and do not mix up the paragraph. For example, do not make paragraphs one, two, or three; the paper will make no sense because the attached document is 70% plagiarized. Please, take your time to read it over because will only deal with someone who follows the instruction of my paper(s)
Another thing, please, in my papers, can you minimize the use of PASSIVE VOICE all over my papers. For example, being included, are located, be considered, be accomplished, and the use of too many that, the & more in a sentence.